Deep within the recesses of my minds eye
Lay the lies and the secrets, companions vaulted and unseen
My hopes, my dreams, my strife, my life
Concealed from the infiltrator’s spy
Waiting to be revealed at the foundation of vino’s curse
Depriving me of both fortune and pride
Now confined alone with only cryptic verse
to proclaim the bareness of my soul and unyielding thirst
lifemeaning4u - Mavrik 
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